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Glim Glim is a male
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Woz up to 6am this morning makin this one..

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was in the zone...

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Glim: 20-03-2006 13:46.

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wicked drums. those pads and sounds could need more work though i think. a bit too simple like that imo. missing some action. not much goin on beside those drums. that vocal sample doenst fit at all imo.

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The intro is a bit too friendly IMO, I don't feel any fear from it. The second synth is even more friendly. Also the melodies you play are rather cheerfull.
This is in heavy contrast with the break and vocals which seem quite agressive.
I would chose a different synth (or tweak it 'till it's nasty).

The break is nicely done, the bass should dominate some more, more variation should be added, f.e. a different break or 2.

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Nice work Glim!,..nice rollin liquid,..pad's could use a layer or two, sprinkled here n there,.. of something simular,..will give pad's more movement,.. like the odd delayed filter sweep over top of what you allready have,. or something like that,..anyway im not makin much sense,..the ideas and chord's used sound deep just a tad presety at the moment imo,..small detail but huge part of the track...Bass sound's awsome man,..like a brickwall,..solid edit's y'all slapped on it,..the shit be groovin!,..Drum's are nice n full soundin,..roll perfectly and are full of treat's,..diggin all the stop's,..Synth at->4:16 doesn't blend with the trak,..allmost sounded like it was fighting for space Frown ,..everything els went really quite when it started....Anyway for a night's work,. is some solid poo Glim!,..Track's a treat....Cheers.

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cheeres equipped, i edited it so that its the newer version now, re equd the whole thing

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sorry glim but the intro is very cheesy.....more songs of praise than dnb.....
it could be nice if you just change some of the notes....
thats more like it...that beat is coooool....that snare is nice. i try for a snare like that sometimes on my harder tracks never really get it though....
the pluky strings fit real nice though....
the bit where all the niceties drop i good suits the drums more.....mmmm like the next drop where the strings come back in for a short while then BAM! back in hard.....
oh no that fisrt string arrangment is back......

overall....good b-line, nice drums.....i think you should loose the intro or do some serious re-arrangment.

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Originally posted by Dj Jimmy C
sorry glim but the intro is very cheesy.....more songs of praise than dnb.....
it could be nice if you just change some of the notes.
New version kick's ass,..had it in my head all dam day,..same note's,..and i dig em!,..deep shit Glim.

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only part i don't dig is where you change em up a bit toward's the end,..i can totally see gettin turned of by this version, so no offence Jimmy C's,..It comes off as cheese for shure,..but them notes are beut imo,..just need's some grit,....cheers.

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Nice work Glim!,..nice rollin liquid,..pad's could use a layer or two, sprinkled here n there,.. of something simular,..will give pad's more movement,.. like the odd delayed filter sweep over top of what you allready have,. or something like that,..anyway im not makin much sense,..the ideas and chord's used sound deep just a tad presety at the moment imo,..small detail but huge part of the track...Bass sound's awsome man,..like a brickwall,..solid edit's y'all slapped on it,..the shit be groovin!,..Drum's are nice n full soundin,..roll perfectly and are full of treat's,..diggin all the stop's,..Synth at->4:16 doesn't blend with the trak,..allmost sounded like it was fighting for space Frown ,..everything els went really quite when it started....Anyway for a night's work,. is some solid poo Glim!,..Track's a treat....Cheers.
hey there you go,..forgot i posted on this lol.

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darn, i love your sound, really wicked, nice things , many ideaas, sound is nicely clean, nice subs, got any remark on it,

keep it up mate and you will get somewhere
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