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Please check out my new track 'Damjan Dameski - Patuvanje Niz Skopje / Skopje Trip' and post your comments here!

Hi everyone i made my first dub step tune,
Feedbacks are more than appreciated ! Smile
Its full tune
Hope u will enjoy Smile

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Cool beat!
Also the synth at 0:44 is very cool.
You build up to a drop at 0:58 but there is no drop.
Yo should make a noise build up to 0:58 and then drop in another synth (a reese or something which you can filter)
The synth at 1:27 sounds offkey. fix that.

You use a lot of different elements, but always use them one by one. This makes that your songs never have a chorus or a part that's coming back.
Try making a solid chorus for a start.

Still a lot of work to this I think mate.

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Sorry but the synth sounds are a bit lush ^^ What do you use for your wobbler? You need way more subbass my young padawan.

I also made some dubstep in the last days:
http://soundcloud.com/the-virtual-riot/virtual-riot-dreaming

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I used 3x osc. Ur tune is good too Smile
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Hey Glodaragz, Pace here. Beat sounds clean. Maybe a bit more punch in the snare.
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Overall its a cool track, i like the drum programming but you could change it up a bit more.

Try some delay on the gong/ bell sound at the start maybe. Some reverb on the hats could be good. Personally i am not a fan of the synth that comes in at 1.28, sounds a bit like a car horn, maybe a softer sound could be good. I love the change up from half time to DnB while the drums fade in at about 2.30 and the synth that comes in while the drums are coming in is ace, have you considerd making the 2nd half be dnb rather than halftime?

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not really my thing although it sounds a bit ametur to say the least mate , sorry

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