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Please check out my new track 'Concrete Wall' and post your comments here!

Hola jalapeneo!

I've worked on this track for quite a while now, and it was a school project that i took quite serious and made a pretty good production of. I wrote some lyrics and recorded my friend rapping them. I hope you like this, and critic the hell out of it if you want!

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The hip hop side of the track doesnt really appeal 2 me personally but its a sold trak with a good end half. Not much bad 2 say apart from id prefer more beefy beats 4 the dnb part, but thats me. Good quality trak, big ups
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that intro was painting pictures to me!!! nicely done

beats need more smack for a bass line n style like i think your going for, tune sounds nice just not the impact drop i was hoping for

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Nice! I think the drums need to be heavier and the sub is a little quiet.

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If i would have raise the sub it would peak, any eq suggestions then?

Could you give an example of beafier drums?

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Try increasing the gain on the EQ at 60 hz and lower at 30hz for the sub.

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@Travis

Sounds like i EQ:ed it for, about under 70hz (cause the kick is 60-100) and cut around 30, though it might be because of it's side chained to the kick-drum so it wouldnt interfere with each other. Thanks for response!

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Not sure about this tune tbh.
Once the tempo switches up, it all sounds great, but the hip-hop/rap influence puts me off in this.
Loving the piano intro though, classy stuff!
The bass works out real nice too, allthough the sub does need some more kick to it.
Nice track overall, but I'd work some more on this.

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Thanks. Well i guess that it depends on what taste you have. I love switching the genre up with some hip hop influences.

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Thanks. Well i guess that it depends on what taste you have. I love switching the genre up with some hip hop influences.


Aye, true. It all depends on taste.
But like I said, very nice work overall, mate!

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hi, this is my first review

the intro was nice, piano and drums was good, the bass was smooth
when the dnb starts, it goes better, drums are perfect to me, smooth, i like the dirty bass, bass are good, its very good i like it alot, it could be a more deep but its ok, the drum edits are good and it change alot of in this track, so the drum edits are good! i like the nice pads, they are smooth, i didnt like the vocals but they wasnt bad, all i can say that this track is perfect, drums,bass,pads all instruments are in good level and in place, the only thing is that the bass could be more deebly, good track, perfect! i like this dark style, 5/5

hope this review was good!?

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