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Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Space Age' and post your comments here!

Still needs work but wanted to here what yall think....oh yeah and anyone wants to right a sick ass bassline for this let me know, would be much appreciated

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Like this mate. Nice ideas in the intro. Maybe boost the kick up a touch.

Like that bass mate. That was the sound I was after and failed ( Crying ) at getting for my last track. Maybe give it a bit more sub though.

I reckon you should change the bleeping noises after a while. The get a little annoying after a while.

Maybe add a few break into the drums.

Nice ideas there. Happy

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Indeed, this sounds great, but it still is missing that sick ass bassline. Maybe a vocal and some synth stabs would be good too?

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ez mate Happy nice drums, nice bass teasing comin from down below, drums could do with more in the intro as they sound a tad distant (personal pref Smile )

woah - ok forget what i said about the drums as when it drops they sound heavy as fuck!! took me by surprise that did! Devil Drummer

my main suggestion for this would be to get more variation in it (melody wise), wicked ideas just needs more change ups to keep it more interesting

nice work man!! Bigup

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looooove the beginning, very nice use of sounds, really spaceeeey. i like those sounds, since i used to hear goa a lot Big Grin
and yeah, the beat does sound heavy... really cool stuff here, just needs more variation.
i dont think you need to change the bleeps, they fit well, and are in the background later on anyway.
anyway, nice job here!

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Like the intro. The drums are a bit too distorted for my liking. The bass could be a bit louder. I also think that you have to change that bleeps after a while. Or at least combine it another ones. I agree with Ketz you need more variation, maybe some new synths too to make it less repetitive.
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EZ

intro is definately a bit long i think, drops pretty heavy but kinda comes out of nowhere, maybe better with a build into the drop.

Hit the nail on the head when you said it needs a sick bassline, is really missing a hook like that at the moment



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Thanks for all the feedback guys, I am trying to work on a hook bassline, and better automation for the drops. Again, anyone wanna help me on a bassline possibly. Will send you a full quality copy for you to work with while trying to the bline. Anyhow thanks again guys, will review more of you's guys stuff in a bit

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beeps and pads are too loud compared to drums, they sound muffled behind the over-powering pads, drums could use some more variations too....beep fx get a little annoying after a while too...the intro in general could use elements too it with more going on....things really pick up when this drops....sub is nice and deep, drums get a bit punchier could still use beefing up a little, kick sounds a bit quiet imo.....nice ideas in this...drop has a lot of impact...i jus think the drums sound a bit muffled, could use cleaning up with a little more high end to brighten em up.....think the track overall could be arranged a bit better...drops seem to come out of nowhere with no real build up....defo got potential this track, jus needs a main hook bassline and some better strucutre/ arrangment....good work tho...

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This is more Breakbeat than DNB. Still, I love Breakbeat as well.

It's pretty good man. At times it can get repeditive. I think it needs more variation. The drums should be a little "tighter" together I think.

Overall, it's really good, I like it. [:
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drums sound gud an likin those little sound effects, i think u are in need of a "sick ass" bassline tho Smile . mix sounds loud an proud. big ups. Timmi

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cool intro, love the heavy drums when they kick in too.
IMO, I'd bring em in a bit earlier and build some more tension in the intro.
Real good sound to this overall, though the rest of the tune kinda doesn't live up to the intro and the heaviness when the main beatz drop.
Maybe bring in a few more elements as it gets a little repetitive.
Everyones said all I'd say on basslines so.. cool!

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great sound from the, all fitting together beautifully.

agree with ketz, the drums sound a lil distant in the first section,

drums now a bit more upfront! Big Grin something about them is saying prodigy to me

with the drums i'd be tempted to tighten up the amp envelops to make it a bit more choppy

But yes this does need a sick bassline, not sure what but it is lacking in that department.

As it is though, i could see this in some sort of TV program. Something like CSI when they have a montage (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2I7LpWb6mhU Big Grin )

when they are testing evidence etc....

Sounding pretty sweet though dude

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Much respeKt for all the feedback. Working on a twisting dark bline for this, and also trying to retweak some bleeps, so they flow in harmony with the new bline I'm making. Will repost when finished. Also, I shortened the intro and definetly added some suspense to the main drop. So be waiting on the finished version some time this week Drummer Oh yeah and btw the weak drums in the intro are meant to be weak like that with no kick just havent set the proper envelopes and automation to it....you will see when I repost the finished tune, the method of my madness Devil

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a very futuristic and a bit dark intro, very very nice. the buildup of the drop is for my taste a lil bit too long, but when the break comes, also that is forgotten. the drumz are very nice and very phat. after the second drop it's sound hell nice, more fuller and warmer.
that's there no bassline i notice but the track without it is really nice, i think with the right deep warm bassline, this track could be a really hot burner but near at the end of the track i find that a outro would be very nice placed, but all in all a hot tune
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