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Here are one of my first attempts of making DnB, the first one is a full song, the second one is a start of a new song and sounds a lot better i think

pls give some feedback! thnx

http://musicminded.entity-project.be/DnB4.mp3

http://musicminded.entity-project.be/DnB7.mp3
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ok mythix , ill only check the first one.

intro: hmmm , starts simple ... ok check this:

snare is too metalic , layer it or take another one , must be fuller .
kick must be phatter too (fruity blood overdrive , or another sample , or layer)
ghostkicks...not done , choose for ghostsnares imo.
hats are a bit static , invole more hats , rides , ...
sub is nice but shouldnt be over the whole track.
reece is cool , but its to repetative + eq it & fatten up the low frequenties to let it sound more full.
good for a beginner , i now i made music like that too.
the melody is kinda cool , but repetative too , change up some more
6:12 that bassmelody is nice , just eq alot more , work on your structure , intro , buildup , drop , breakdown/up , drop , breakdown , outro..
and ...practise a lot. I did all that stuff too.
good luck mythix Bigup
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DnB7.mp3 is now updated, thanks for the reply Greyone but i don't know what you mean by all those terms Big Grin but check the update, there still something wrong with the bassline i think Smile
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