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Azlateen Azlateen is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Fight The System' and post your comments here!

This is a tune that's out on my new EP that was just released. The vocals were recorded by me. If you think it's related to anarchy, then it's related to anarchy, but really, it's very open ended. I didn't intend it to be SPECIFICALLY anarchist, but instead, it's for something you want to fight again.
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the lead synth sounds like it needs to be opened up abit to fit the beats better try playing with the envelope abit also the structure sounds like a loop rather then a full on tune maybe this could do with a breakdown in the middle however i have listend to the whole thing so must be something i like there probaly the amen
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I find the programming pretty simplistic, the balance of your mixdown quite poor and you may want to keep some elements of your mixdown in mono as most elements seem to be panned pretty hard left and right atm. Also the tune doesnt really progress from the main 8 bar loop...I found it pretty montonous

Just realised its already released so you probably werent after crits but whatever there's my 2 cents anyhoo

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Drums are way too stereo. Keep atleast the low end of the drums mono and don't overdo it with stereo.
Bass misses power. Vocals are nice.


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The mix is horrid and some sounds are way to loud and soft. Drums sound filtered and not present. There are some cool ideas here but over all the track is not cohering into something potent. There is no intro no drop and no build up. The whisteling sound could use some layering. I was bored by 1:35.

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Shit I knew I should done this before I released the damn thing... Thanks for all your feedback everyone! It'll definitely help with my other tracks so i won't be so embarrassed lol Thanks again Big Grin
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Hey man I have been producing for over 4 years now and I JUST released my first track. It takes time to get there and it take a lot of practice. But once you get the formula completely you can replicate it and produce more rapidly. In the beginnning it took Noisia 5 months to produce a tune (The Tide) and now they roll sick ones out basically every day or at least more rapidly. Just stick with it and LISTEN to a lot of tunes. The KEY TOP SECRET is just to EQ all the ununsed frequencies out of your sounds so that they can all fit together and then route all your similar tracks into SUBMIXES where you can treat them all individually. So for example I woud route all my drums into a submixer that would have compression and an EQ for sub bass cut. This track here though is no small accomplishment you ovbiously have skill and potential so keep working at it. Check my track Spellbound....

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Structure:
A track shouldn't have an intro, but in this case, I do miss some kind of intro (could be vocal). It does make the track kind of static, which is a major hickup. I'd put the break a bit earlier as well, cause right now it's missing the room to breathe, but this could as well be caused by the lack of an intro, I'd experiment with that.

Melodies etc.:
The melodies are nothing refreshing or new, but they work, simple as that. The high synth (at 1:11 e.g.) works very well, it slows down the track a bit, but that's a good thing.

After all a decent track, but I would rearrange the structure a bit so the track has room to get some air, keep it up!

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maybe its my speakers [cheapo pc speakers atm my monitors aren't here] but the vocals sound way too loud, are they red lining? I can't tell from this end. I like the concept though, the drums are fast and the bass is one of the best elements in this track in my opinion. the breakdown at 2.10 would be better if you dropped out some drums only to bring them back in at 2.31 with even more vigor. Madness tune mate keep it up!
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