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Please check out my new track 'Scream' and post your comments here!


Ok,
This is a pretty old tune of mine. recently ive been making more dubstep than DnB but thought id jump back into drum for a bit. Check out this tune, i know it needs some work but thought id get a bit of feedback before i give it a revamp.

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Excuse the Amen rinsage!

Cheerz.

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Haha thats pure amen all the way through.. might be nice if it wasn't tho lol. I don't really have anything against the amen, I think it's just used as an easy way out a lot of the time. I love the intro, it should be longer tho, and have more of a build up to the drop. The drops lacking a bit in power, it needs something else sitting behind the bass to give it a boost. The bass is a little muddy, and theres a really quiet line fighting to be heard in there aswell. At 1.54 when the pad comes back in it works really well. The overall mix s quite low in volume aswell.

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i like the intro very much. for me, it's characteristic for dubstep but its suits also very very good in this tune. the bass is really dope, could listen to this wobble all the time Big Grin
and the break is also burner, it's for my flavour really nice, cause i listen a lot to ragga jungle, and there is much like this amen break Smile
when you would ask me, what u can do better (indeed i'm a beginner, but anyway Smile ) you could stretch the wobble bass, but don't know if the other people also would like it. i don't know if the hole world is wobble addict like me Smile
so i'm gonna listen to another tracks from you.
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Aight dude the idea and composition is perfect

the mixdown isnt worth a dollar

its too flat
kick should be compressed and snare
bass needs too loose some 80 till 160 hzz muddy frequencies

just use teh ears


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Shit me that sub is overwhelming! That could do with a little taming lol, It could be turned down a bit and still have a big enough impact. The drums are barebones, I think they need a few more hits to make them really roll, with a high end ride break or something to give it more air. Some of the drums could be mixed better, the tickiticktick of the hats is sitting above the snare and kick and not sounding right.. Loving the atmosphere in the intro, If you could in corporate that after the drop without muddying it then i reckon it'd sound fuller. Not really feeling the bassline, loving the sound..just not the line. Maybe thats just me tho!

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there's no harm in a bit of amen rinsage lol. wen i use the amen break tho i rekon its best to layer some other snares, kicks, hats, an other breaks etc, to make it sound more original.

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PS
Excuse the Amen rinsage!


Hey, no need to apologise! I'm a big fan of amen breakage, even tho I never do it myself.

In general, this is a nice track. Sounds kinda muddy tho. You should think about increasing the high-mids and highs a bit.

Love the amen breaks. They have a nice amount of reverb on them.

Basslines are very good. They definitely suffer from being too muddy tho.

I love the way you bring in those choir-like vocals half way through the tune. Very atmospheric and trippy.

Structure is tight. Cool stuff mate. Happy

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